I did promise eye popping. :D
This scene feel familiar?
I LOVE your detail and story line. Fantastic. Can’t wait for more!
Issue 1, pg 18 – 20. The art is truly getting into the classic horror mode. Even the jaw popping out with the eyes is a wonderfully macabre touch. Writing-wise, I am enjoying how Richard is being portrayed as a real and flawed person. Even his righteousness can be viewed as a significant flaw which only adds to the character’s dimensions. This is in stark contrast to the so called flawed super-heroes whose flaws are more rooted in story-telling convenience and some sort of injustice that happened to them. Richard’s flaws are much more believable. Who hasn’t been in denial over a significant item in their lives at some point? Despite being a rather unlikable hero, to me he is very believable as a character.
Thanks! Richard is going to be going through some very interesting times now
Woah, I love how the story is going on. I just fear that Malice is going to break rchard mentally by utterly shattering his view of Cathy. You really are a Hilariously great writer who keeps his audience on the edge of their chairs by making the story more and more fascinating!
Also: the ‘krick’ noise in the third panel made me twitch really bad. awesomely placed sound effect!
Woot! You mean I actually did the sound effect right for once? Yay!
As for the edge of the seat, I do try to have the last panel be a bit of a cliff hanger. Can’t always manage it but thats the goal.
Rawwwwr death and destruction This is what comics are meant for!
Well one of the things they’re meant for! Comics do PrON quite well too.
first time commenter here
love the comic… words can’t describe how much i adore the writing and art
also just noticed when i hover the arrow over the picture it has some alt-text xD that’s always fun and now after i catch up i’ll have to start over to catch all the ones i missed